The image looks real good but a few tips in my non-professional wisdom. More toward the model postioning and attire than photographic skill.
I feel the shadow of the arm and pole take away from the image. At least without more of the shadow. The main focus of the photo is the model. The shadow seems to pull my eyes to it therefore making it distracting.
Love the pose! The clothes choice on the otherhand could have used some more thought. The ...skirt..I assume, I think it would have been better to have it pulled evenly across the hips. (lower in back or higher in front, a little of both would have been my choice. The bra or bustier, does not fit right, again drawing my eyes to that side of the photo and causing a distraction.
Im sorry, but i must agree with da-phil. That was the first thing that i noticed-being that her breasts were much to small. Other than that i like the lipstick color and how you made the hair look so long. Good work.
I feel the shadow of the arm and pole take away from the image. At least without more of the shadow. The main focus of the photo is the model. The shadow seems to pull my eyes to it therefore making it distracting.
Love the pose! The clothes choice on the otherhand could have used some more thought. The ...skirt..I assume, I think it would have been better to have it pulled evenly across the hips. (lower in back or higher in front, a little of both would have been my choice. The bra or bustier, does not fit right, again drawing my eyes to that side of the photo and causing a distraction.
Outside of that, Love the work keep it up!
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