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I Saw You With Another Girl by Piddling I Saw You With Another Girl by Piddling






model : Dalida Gutierrez more of her at PhotoModel <----
















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the concept is that she watches her boyfriend through the window, with another girl

rainy day at Marathon, Greece
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-04-05
I Saw You With Another Girl by *Piddling This DD is very successful in its story-telling aspect. ( Suggested by CarmenVeloso and Featured by astridle )
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A picture can paint a thousand words, and to me this one says so much.
The concept is very strong and you can feel the emotions in this immage.
I feel as though I am looking in with the young girl, a very thought provoking piece with so many levelles.
Do you percieve it as one who has been cheeted on, or one who is in love with but unable to reach and show their feelings for the young man inside, I like the fact that the windows are not clean so the vision of the couple is unclear, the picture doesn't show the couple as concted there fore leaving us with another thought, could the two inside be no more than freinds or relatives?
You can sense the need, and desire to go inside and convey feelings from the young girl looking in but there is the impending fear too that it may be a mistake.
An incredibly open but deep running picture that tells more than one story depending on who is interpreting it.
A great technique,
Deffinitely origional,,
And the impact in this is brilliant because of how it makes me think:iconxpose-it:
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What do you think?
The Artist thought this was FAIR
57 out of 58 deviants thought this was fair.

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KaizenKitty Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2013  Student Writer
Actually, I kind of disagree with the critique on this work. Yes, it's a beautiful photo (that's why I favorited it), but it doesn't convey the feeling of heartbreak. The girl is too sexualized for that to work -- her pose is not of someone who feels left out, it's a pose of a model, doing her job. Plus the foggy windows give the impression that it's cold outside -- why is she wearing a summer dress? The people inside look more dressed than she is.

I like the idea behind it, and the composition of this photo is very good, but it doesn't incite emotion or empathy in me. Basically because the girl is not acting the part (and perhaps the costume design is an issue too).
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Inkaos Featured By Owner Sep 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Beautiful shot, may I use it in a photo-manipulation I'm  planning to create ? 
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Chocolatecookiecrumb Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Beautifully done!
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:iconfrijolehijo:
FrijoleHijo Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
reminds me of the one scene from the Great Gatsby, did that inspire this by any chance?
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Shespeaksinspirals Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Professional Artist
.. perfect
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:iconaugenweide:
augenweide Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
your beautiful work is featured here [link]
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:iconrems84:
Rems84 Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
s w e e t !
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platinummyr Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This photograph is phenomenal. Very brilliant, and extremely well done. It definitely deserves the daily :)
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:iconmsfrox:
msfrox Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
You could title this as "Window Pain"
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:iconnessapalmer:
NessaPalmer Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional General Artist
Congratz on the DD! You definitely deserve it! :D
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:iconares12:
ares12 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Writer
Too bad, for the girl, that she isn't seeing through a rifle scope.
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KahlanAmnell123 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Hehe your comment made me laugh. Too bad she is not looking from a roof top with a sniper onto her lover :D
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Vivi-kiramaru-sama19 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Great shot! I love the concept and emotion in this. This shot displays a story very well and beautifully. The dirty window serves as a barrier between the girl and the other two people, symbolizing the blockade in their relationship and the unclear/unpure truth. The fact that we are also behind the barrier makes us feel as if we were in the girl’s position, staring out to a room with nothing but chairs and shadows. The silhouettes symbolize a few things: we are looking at their dark side (cheating is considered unpure and dark) and that we don’t see (or in the case of the girl in the photo, “feel”) what we once saw in them before.

Once again, beautiful photo. It’s quite touching and emotional.
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rosepetal179 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
oh my...i understand the feeling of being cheated on. my current boyfriend cheats on me by talking to other girls.
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NEMIS007 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Very strong. :wow:
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Brawrloxoss Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
This is a great shot and a meaninful concept, and the boyfriend's a fool!
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msfrox Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
you cant say that by just looking at the outside
who knows how she is from the inside. :p
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Brawrloxoss Featured By Owner Apr 6, 2013
Quite true. Quite true.
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Val-Faustino Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
Great concept and presentation :thumbsup: Congrats on the DD :clap:
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srcpcsoha Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Congrats on the DD~!
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:iconcrowsreign:
CrowsReign Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional Photographer
Congrats gia akoma mia fora!!!!
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lilyjamesship Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Exw to idio foustani xDD
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Vanshira Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
"I don't think either of you saw me, but you were hard to miss - you were the only two people in the cafe, besides the waitress. I guess I can't really be sure what I saw yet - you two weren't exactly cuddling and kissing and being really obviously lovey-dovey. You weren't even sitting that close together. But you two sure talked a lot, and she sure knew how to make you laugh. You never laugh that much when you talk to me, was all I could think at the time. I didn't recognize her, so I guess she could have been just a friend. She could have been your sister, for all I know; I remember you mentioned you have one. But I'm always going to wonder, because I'm not brave enough to ask, and I'm not brave enough to tell you the real reason why I'm acting so strange today."
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elsevilla Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
great title.
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pranav03 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Great Shot!
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TheGalleryOfEve Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congratulations on your well-deserved DD!!! :iconflyingheartsplz::iconlainloveplz: :iconflyingheartsplz: :clap::clap::clap:
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bypass2020 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
Captures the mood perfectly.

Favourite part? Those gorgeous dirty marks on the glass.
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ValiantShadow Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student General Artist
This image has so much power; just looking at it is like getting punched in the gut.
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elecxra Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Congratulations of the Daily Deviation! ♥
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preethi9691 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
wow.. love this picture :heart:
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:iconlintu47:
lintu47 Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
    Congrats on the well deserved DD! :dalove:
    Have a nice day! :heart:
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CoffeeFate Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
...and so I clung to the window like a stalker, instead of going inside to figure out what the hell was going on, and possibly dumping your two-timing self.
(And then later, as I was arrested for loitering, I wondered if you noticed. Did you notice me? Did you see?
....Will you come bail me out?)
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:iconxeneras:
xeneras Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Professional Photographer
Panta tetoia
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vanmall Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Congrats on the Daily Deviation! :happybounce:
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Boriak Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2013
The distance between them does not suggest a romantic bond. I hope you don't mind...
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FadingToDarkness Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Wonderful concept, great focus, and spectacularly taken!
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livedream Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2012  Student Interface Designer
very nice
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yzarcemina Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2012
absolutely love this, this is exactly wow i'm feeling now..

my friend used it in her blog
Here: [link]

hope you don't mind :)
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:iconpiddling:
Piddling Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Professional
no, its fine as long as she put the reference (that i see she already did) :)
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:iconyzarcemina:
yzarcemina Featured By Owner May 1, 2012
another friend saw it and put it as her cover photo on facebook.

here: [link]

didn't think to ask first though, not sure if she credited you properly. i'll ask her to take it down if you want me to. :)

just goes to show how awesome it is
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:iconpiddling:
Piddling Featured By Owner May 2, 2012  Professional
its ok :) as long as nobody tries to make money out of it, or tells its his/hers :)
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:icondeeamars:
deeamars Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
[link] i used it here.. hope you don't mind:)
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:iconpiddling:
Piddling Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2012  Professional
no its ok :)
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sinendrA Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012
A+ dreamyiest nostalgik_a ^_^
:bookdiva: :gummybear:
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Lanatrellana Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2012  Professional Artist
it"s make me cry...ur pic..
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:iconprincessdasha:
princessdasha Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2011
Too brilliant! :heart:
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harera22dec Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2011
nice
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johngiannis27 Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2011  Professional Interface Designer
perfect!
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Lucineia Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2011
Καταπληκτική!!!
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