A really lovely looking model in an interesting location. Good pose and expression. Lovely line and good connection with boots and clothes by colour.
I particularly like the rim lighting.
Things that I might change: a) the light roof and window behind her skirt/leg/waist - I find this competes for my eye and does not add to the picture. I think the background is interesting enough. b) I would prefer her breast not to have broken the line of her arm. c) I might have had her stick her chin out a little more because it seems to disappear into her neck.
These changes would make a relatively small improvement to an overwhelming like great image.
I particularly like the rim lighting.
Things that I might change:
a) the light roof and window behind her skirt/leg/waist - I find this competes for my eye and does not add to the picture. I think the background is interesting enough.
b) I would prefer her breast not to have broken the line of her arm.
c) I might have had her stick her chin out a little more because it seems to disappear into her neck.
These changes would make a relatively small improvement to an overwhelming like great image.
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