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November 24, 2012
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Make
NIKON CORPORATION
Model
NIKON D90
Shutter Speed
1/60 second
Aperture
F/4.0
Focal Length
130 mm
ISO Speed
1250
Date Taken
Jan 22, 2011, 6:14:47 PM
Software
Adobe Photoshop CS6 (Windows)
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:iconrubystone11:
First of all, let me state that this is my first time writing a critique, so It may not be as in depth as some might be.

I love the color in this piece. Especially her hair. It contrasts so well with the rest of the piece. But the first thing that caught me attention was her eye. The make-up is so simple, but I believe it was best like that. It makes her eyes look sharp, like the glass. I love that you can see the tattoo on her wrist too. I like the fact that she isn't staring straight at the camera also. It makes the photo really come to life because if I was to be there, I wouldn't expect her to look at me while look forlornly of to the distance.

The only thing that takes away from this picture at all it the bottom of the picture. I think you could have cropped up quite a bit. My reasoning behind this, is her skin, while beautiful doesn't look as nice there. There is too much of that color in the picture, and I think cropping it to the lower part of her shoulder might have fixed it.

All in all, I love this picture. So many things were right about it, the emotion, color, the glass, her hair and eyes, that the thing I pointed out is almost irrelevant. So good job, and I hope to see more pictures like this in the near future.
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:iconkkht311:
kkht311 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2012
Lovely.

:-)
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:iconfictionfreak72:
fictionfreak72 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student
very nice use of color.
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:iconcrowsreign:
CrowsReign Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2012  Professional Photographer
wow!!!!loved it!!!;)
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:iconaprmason:
aprmason Featured By Owner Nov 27, 2012
Wonderful portrait.

Toni.
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:iconfum316:
fum316 Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2012  Student General Artist
Mystic:clap:
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:iconnotoriousbenny:
notoriousbenny Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
good job, one again
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:iconzoompixs:
zoompixs Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012
Really like the contrast between the very soft sensitive look at the broken jagged glass.
Her eye lash shape is unique and I can't help but looking at it over and over.
I read the critique. In understand the opinion on the different color lower down and crop option.
To me seeing the exposed side of the breast and different color adds to the whole story...so it works for me as is.
It's a striking photo.
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:iconqisas:
Qisas Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
So Great and beautifuL :blowkiss:
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:iconmatthewosullivan:
MatthewOSullivan Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow the model is beautiful and the hair color is red. I enjoy seeing redheads. Keep up the excellent work.
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:iconn-l-e:
n-l-e Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
nice one
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