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Speaking about legs, The shoes reduce here the impact in my opinion. I would either have gotten them out, or adapt the models top to these dress shoes.
Speaking about the head, I found the model a bit lost. Her expression could have been more direct, or hard. Here she looks like the photographer didn't gave any direction.
Last downside is about the cut shadow on the left, that distract me because it has a such great form that I keep wanting to have it all included in the image.
That was my only downsides. Don't get me wrong, I found this shot awesome as it is. Here are just some very small improvment points in my humble opinion.
Really like this shot, dof is spot on. love the colour contrasts between the model and the rusty metal. Only slight thing that got me was the 'shot by vit', just wished that was somewhere else as it draws the eye away from the stunning model. If it was down the bottom or away from her eye line it would have been alot better - obviously thats a minor detail and just my opinion. As for the actual shot, I have no complaints. Beautiful colours, lighting and camera work. Great location by the looks of it too.
Truely a great shot though. well done. Top marks for the model too. stunning
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